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small improvements on anti-corporate rant ;^)

Jaromil 2 years ago
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                                     Devices are supposed to be reasonably safe to use. And home devices to be non-operative when unsupervisioned.
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-                                    For example, before leaving your house for holidays you close the gas. Imagine devices having open flames (
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+                                    For example, before leaving your house for holidays you close the gas mains. Imagine devices having open flames (
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                                     <a href="http://mashable.com/2015/03/17/ge-barbecue/#qDSGklBBlPq5">your barbecue </a>) or
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                                     <a href="http://www.telecomtv.com/articles/iot/the-connected-washing-machine-well-that-s-a-load-off-my-mind-12801/">powerfull motors</a>
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-                                    that are attached to your water pipe systems and that can be activated by remote. Sounds like a home of the future?
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+                                    that are attached to your water pipe systems and that can be activated remotely. Does it sounds like a home of the future?
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                                     <br>
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-                                    Dangerous sites on the network can install software intended to do harm, corporatations can infere
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-                                    from your metadata pattern to sell you more goods you don't really want poisoning your attention span.
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-                                    These corporations do not need to know this metadata and could leak them simply by a lack of technical
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+                                    Dangerous sites on the network can install software intended to do harm, corporations can infer
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+                                    from your usage patterns to sell you more goods, but noone really wants all this poisoning of our attention span.
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+                                    These corporations do not need to know how how you use your devices, they can leak information about you simply by a lack of technical
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                                     skills or consideration. They could not know and simply leak them by mistake. Or even worse: sell them
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                                     and make money by something you give them unaware and for free. But don’t just believe us. Check for yourself :)
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